Suggestions
The beginning of your article should have something to catch the readers attention.
Perhaps the date of the event can come up first. There are some grammatical errors that
do need to be revised.
When writing your article you should keep in mind that the article shouldn't be opinionated.
Try to keep personal opinions,such as "Students that participate in this event are very talented"
Try to keep factual and informational.
Another thing to be cautious of is don't be so redundant. If you are running out of things to say
simply move onto to another aspect of the event. At the same time keep straight to the point,and keep the reader entertained.
Ending strong is also a very important part of writing a newsletter.
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